Aww!! Just when it was REALLY getting good!! : ) You should finish this, I was really enjoying the villain. Heheheh... You should write more for the Lady of Akai, too! This one isn't as funny, but I'm still really liking it.

wow I love the idea its very original and the plot is funny too! please keep writing because i really wanna know what happens!

Can me and my friend make this into a movie?

Ahhhh! The villian is actually being evil!!
Please continue!!!

Beer and women, sounds good to me!

(kidding)

The hag kicks ass!

(continued from last review) Wow..I JUST noticed that?

This is weird, the villian is making friends with his prisoner?

Willy! Hehehe! Like the skeleton archer!!!

I'm actually starting to like that hag. The knight is funny too ^_^

That hag reminds me of a girl at school...

"I love children, but I could never eat a whole one!"

That poor bastard...

That was odd. Oh well, you're keeping my interest.

I'm mildly interested...

This is hilarious!!
The Villain is my favourite character, but the Sidekick is funny too.
somehow I always like the "evil" characters...I wonder what that says about me psychologically..hmm...

Hello!!!!! I added chapter 8! It's very good! I also got a guinea pig today!!! (I know you like guinea pigs) Anyway, he's so cute. He's squirrel-colered, and I named him Piggles! He is so sweet and he loves to be cuddled.... and my sister got a gray fuzzy hamster. She named her Cleo. Anyway read chapter 8! bye!

YEA! U uploaded! after like, an eternity!!!!!!!!

oh man! i thought the villain would have a soft spot for the princess but i guess i was wrong. sigh!!!! and the knight is really, really pathetic. i hope he just lies there throughout the rest of the play. or something. lol!!!

great job, red! i hope you keep working on this, but (as i've wanred you countless of times) don't neglect your wonderful fantasy story The Adver-Ties and of course the best humorous real-life fantasy story Redlady's Kingdom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

they're the best!

luv,
lener