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| RoseRedSnowWhite 2007-03-03 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so sweet, and so sad at the same time. I loved it. Great job! Rose Red |
| RhiaSilverwind 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sad. Very beautifully written. Reminded me a bit of Anne Rice but with its own style. It would be nice to know what happened to them... |
| WhisperElmwood 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI'd love to know waht happened, but as it is, I love this story |
| Deuil 2004-03-01 ch 1, | abuseT_T *cries* That...was so sad! really beautiful and well written! I wish you could have written more about them before they died though! wahh...very anne rice-ish. Nice vampire slash. ^_^ |
| Ris Blackwind 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abuse*cries* This is really good. You should continue writing about them. I would like to know what happened before it... |
| blank 2003-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was sad, true, but beautiful. please continue with your writings. |
| sitaloire 2003-05-26 ch 1, | abuseGod, this story hurts. Does that sound ridiculous? I don't care. It hurts. I feel lonely. |
| Val Mora 2003-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOhh... so sad... *sniffles* So very, very sad. Uhm, I'm not French, so feel free to ignore my advice, but I think you got the endearments wrong: cherie is feminine; the masculine form of it is chere (with an accent grave over the first e); 'amor' should be 'amour'. Other than those little things, this is absolutely, terribly, heartbreakingly gorgeous, and I love it. |
| Ouvalyrin 2003-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWoah. Poor vamps. What does mon amor mean? I think it means something like my love, right? |
| Aijin 2002-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was awesome! I haven't read many stories in this perspective, mainly because they're often times poorly written. But this was wonderfully done! I love how you make references to a past between the two vampires but you don't delve into it, leaves some things to the imagination of the readers. ^_^ And I just love stories about vamps in general, just 'cause I have a soft spot for the li'l bloodsuckers. Anyway, I really am fond of this perspective the way you've written it. ^^ Not to mention the story! It was awesome indeed. |
| Noliena 2002-02-28 ch 1, | abusehehe, yeah, i like my own stories... |
| Lea 2002-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease, Please, Please, continue this fanfic! You have me so intrigued! If you do decide to continue please e-ail me so I will know when to look for it! Thanks. |
| Shadow 3013 2002-01-20 ch 1, | abuseYay. Angsty-fluffy vampires slash. Just what we all need! Good fic so far... But I want more! Like... Names? Hee... You definitely need to add on to this one. Prequel and Sequel... More than one of each? Please? |
| Alex Destine 2002-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThis looks like a very good story, please continue it. ^_^ |