That was so sweet, and so sad at the same time. I loved it. Great job!
Rose Red

It's so sad. Very beautifully written. Reminded me a bit of Anne Rice but with its own style. It would be nice to know what happened to them...

I'd love to know waht happened, but as it is, I love this story

T_T *cries* That...was so sad! really beautiful and well written! I wish you could have written more about them before they died though! wahh...very anne rice-ish. Nice vampire slash. ^_^

*cries*
This is really good. You should continue writing about them. I would like to know what happened before it...

that was sad, true, but beautiful. please continue with your writings.

God, this story hurts.

Does that sound ridiculous? I don't care. It hurts. I feel lonely.

Ohh... so sad... *sniffles* So very, very sad.
Uhm, I'm not French, so feel free to ignore my advice, but I think you got the endearments wrong: cherie is feminine; the masculine form of it is chere (with an accent grave over the first e); 'amor' should be 'amour'.
Other than those little things, this is absolutely, terribly, heartbreakingly gorgeous, and I love it.

Woah. Poor vamps. What does mon amor mean? I think it means something like my love, right?

Wow... that was awesome! I haven't read many stories in this perspective, mainly because they're often times poorly written. But this was wonderfully done! I love how you make references to a past between the two vampires but you don't delve into it, leaves some things to the imagination of the readers. ^_^ And I just love stories about vamps in general, just 'cause I have a soft spot for the li'l bloodsuckers. Anyway, I really am fond of this perspective the way you've written it. ^^ Not to mention the story! It was awesome indeed.

hehe, yeah, i like my own stories...

Please, Please, Please, continue this fanfic! You have me so intrigued! If you do decide to continue please e-ail me so I will know when to look for it! Thanks.

Yay. Angsty-fluffy vampires slash. Just what we all need! Good fic so far... But I want more! Like... Names? Hee... You definitely need to add on to this one. Prequel and Sequel... More than one of each? Please?

This looks like a very good story, please continue it. ^_^