i luv it! awesome :)

Anesta

nice nice. i liked it. i see talent!

nice but I don't think you started rhyming until the second half if you need help with rhyming word's and stuff I suggest you go to .com it has ton's of stuff for help and even some contest's you might like to enter

your a very good poet.

that was a poem that really got to me.

Made me feel like what it was talking about.

That was a really good poem.

ooh that was nice

Thats not too bad. With a little work you could have something really really good here. good job _ neri-chan

Now I love you. This is what my pen name is all about, that fire within us all. Know, I picture the fire of life a more positive thing, but hey different people different opinions. The fire of a champion doesn't burn the brightest, but the steadiest. That's it, your on my favorite authors and this poem is on my favorite stories.

HUm. Nice. Sorta Shaky on the meaning but after reading a few times i think i picked it up _ the Rhyming isnt bad either. I think its farily well done. More then fairly, thats jsut the first word that poped into my head then LOL. It does one good thing for me... It paints a Nice Mental picture of me to put to use in my Paintings. *So tired* If you enjoy Poems... maybe take a fast look at Childhood Dreams at My site. It might inspire you as yours has inspired me. I need to work on Rhyming Poems more. x.x Its hard though so i give you Mega props!

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