i loved this magical piece. the mist and the chanting only adds more mysterious-ness to it, which then adds to the beauty. wonderful work! my brain just kinda let go from the life of a ninth grader, and became something much more creative.

This is amazing, it's so beautiful! I can't describe it any more than that, but I'm going to come back and read the rest of your stuff when I have time!
~A. Person

That was beatuful! It's so enchanting! You picked your words perfectly

Spelling could use some work, and you also might want to use Shift+Enter to get the spaces between the lines a little smaller. This sounds like it would go more under "Song" than just "Poetry" due to the refrain; otherwise I'd say you were repeating too much.
Anyway, this is good stuff - I'd read the rest but I'm not sure I have time (haven't done my daily poems yet)...

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Lovley!!!This is great work! I hope you will review my poems! I have some Fariy ones and some fantisy ones!God Bless!- fael tinu

This is going to be on my favorites list. Love it!

OMG! I love it! Well, duh! Of course I do! Sorry, I'm a bit insane and a little too obsessed with faeries! *hence the name Demented Fairy* Oh, you are my favorite person now! I love it when people write about faeries! Ok, I'll stop now. I might have scared you. If I did, I'm sorry! Oh, BTW, thanks for reviewing my poems. It was greatly appreciated!

Yeah! I have a review! It's from me but it's a review! woooo-whooooo!