i am now officially in love with you. that was awesome. youre really weird!

You are an amazing writer. I love your work!

Jesus Crist that is awsome! So descriptive, I love it!
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Wow, that was realy fantastic, the colours, the sound sall combined to create the image so well. It is truly a magnificent piece of work.

well done Will that was great
very very inspirational writting
good work
keep it up
love xen

WOW...... DG that really blew me away! another great piece of work! you have a talent in writing and it shows in this!

I thought it was very very good...I found it to be very moving. Most poetry doesn't mean anything to me, but after I read the first couple of lines, I went back and read them again because it kinda made me "snap" and really get into it. It was like all of a sudden I was able to visualise in my head what was happening, and so the first 3 or 4 lines meant so much more after that happened!
I felt as though it grabbed me as I read it and made me really think about what it would be like to be there...to be enjoying something so innocent and then to have something so horrible happen. It doesn't leave you standing on the outside - it makes you feel like you were a part of it all.