 RhiaRaye 2003-11-10 . chapter 1That's a good poem. Very good meaning. |
 bob15 2003-03-05 . chapter 1All I can say is Wow! Such feeling. Not in a long time have I read a poem that was as emotional as this. A real tear-jerker! |
 Karmatic Sunshine 2002-02-11 . chapter 1its so true, that one day (after high school usually...) we have the advantage to be exactly who we want and stereotypes that high school usually has, are gone... barriers are broken down
i cant wait till i graduate... im not trying to say that it solves all problems, but i can dream cant i ?!
keep up the good work. i love the last 3 lines the best.
-----Karma---- |
 phaedra2 2002-01-21 . chapter 1this is nice. spreading her wings. its such a sweet idea. this isn't too deep that you need to find meanings, but it spells its message out for you, and i like it. |
 Angel of Peace 2002-01-17 . chapter 1aw this wuz really sweet!!! |
 Dreamweaver2 2001-12-29 . chapter 1cool! this is ME! the writer! FUN! This is a pretty sad poem but it felt good to write. hope you liked it. |