ahh when are you going to finish?? soo good!

THIS IS HORRIBLE GO WRITE YOU **

-you

damnit girL! that was good! and i cant believe its over....blaahh
come on...u gotta make another sequel.....and i so thought that there was chemistry between violet and devon......maybe next time, when they're sophomores, u can have them taking chemistry, and create chemistry between them hhahahaa....okay...i'm a dork.
but god....i'm so proud of you!! that was DA BOMB. hehehe
WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!

Thu, that wuz the best story i've ever read. i've read it at least 3 times, and it'z still great!
Hurley-WHO IZ DEVON???? tell meeeeeee!!! NOOOOOO!!!! *falls 2 knees* *raises hands 2 sky* WHYYYYYYYY?????? ok, so i'm weird. but tell me n-e-way...lolz! luv u all, m/

what can i say about this story? it's beautiful; it made me laugh; it made my heart simper in love; it gave me joy; slapped a smile onto my face; i read it 5 darn enjoyable times; i loved the swearing and cursing (loved it so much)O:-)
; loved _the_ _excessive_ _cool_ _use_ _of_ _the_ _underscores_
wow wow wowie... now i'm just simply wondering what this story relates to... *ponders*
chocolate=good, sugar=whoa!, fish stix=bleah, you=genuinely great friend :')
now 'bout devon... tat guy was awesome. he had all the moves, perfect timing, good rotation (knew when to switch from funny to serious)... man he was good...
as for dat girl... she certainly had her freak on... she was a cool "attitude, emotional, independent woman" very koolio yupperz muh
homie-g.
is devon some lucky man or just another amazing character or your's thu?? O:-) peace! ~i luv food~

ummmmm great story
amazing
award material
i want to publish it
.............i kno who devon is.....................
hhehehehehe
dont worry i won tell
promise
all u people
devon is........ooo cant say...............
ok fine.........devon is.........
A SECRET CHARACTER


!!

I smell like cheese.

Everyone congradulate me - I finally figured out the title! His last name is Tigers - eyes of the tiger - I get it!!! Ahh, the world is right again! I love you, Midnight.

wow that was a sweet story. who is "devon" exactly?

wow that was a sweet story. who is "devon" exactly?

that iz so good! it moved me-just like that poem. hehe! keep writing!

Ahh!! Thuie! Its so0o0o good! And you say theres no romance~! Hah! Its really good, Thu! Keep up all the terrific work!
I loved it! Buh byes!

kiMmIe(Serene Angel)

*sigh* Devon's so perfect. Okay, so go Midnight! You've made good revisions, and I like the way you took the focus away from the whole military thang. It's very sweet. Do teenage guys really say stuff like you've put in ch 6? I like how you actually say something about judging and assumptions with this story. And how you don't use a kiss as the climax. The conclusions leaves me wanting more, though. The story isn't over. That doesn't mean that you need to write more, but just that you need to let the action fall, and there isn't enough falling.

OMG I was thanked! I am so honored! Lol, damn, you ARE a genius, girl. I have 3 comments - "Next year. Ack." I don't like the 'ack,' I just don't think it fits that well. Also, the ending, "High school is starting to look up." I don't think the "look up" part works well, and I think you should have a stronger ending for this story. And my third comment is the title, Eyes of the Tiger- there's nothing wrong with it, I just don't really get it. Other than that, mazel tov! Revising is over! Wahoo!

Thu, it is absolutely terrific! I actually can't find anything wrong with this chapter, lol! I can't wait to read chapter six. Looking good, babe!