Beautiful.. I love it,, keep up the great work

This poem reminds me of the series of books by Diane Duane starting with 'So You Want To Be A Wizard'. Yeah, the title of the first book is a little detering, but it's not like that at all. I would highly recomend them. Anyway... This is a great piece. You've alot of talent-- run with it.

~Starry

Beautiful!

O MY GAWD!

THAT'S SO TRUE!!!! :(

*CRIES

i LOVE this poem. very good.

actually, I think the ancestors never thought the all the spoilage of the land would go so far.....but...nice poem

I liked both the concept and the melodic rhythm of this poem. Mm, I think I noticed a typos: shouldn't it be "ancestors"? :)
And btw, thank you for liking my Eowyn poem (the first half of it, at least, which is also my favorite).

*Sniffles* Man, if people fear death, then why destroy the world? I do hope that people wake up and smell the roses, soon....
Another well-written poem!

Beautiful! Your words are so true and they just resonate in my heart.

I like the poem. It reminds me of a book I read called "More Minds" you have probably read it too.

this is true, and it makes you think.

I like the part about the ancestors.

excellent poem. I love the part about the ancestors. Thank you for the review by the by. That was very nice of you.

Oooo. This is pretty good. It makes me wanna go out and pick up garbage or recycle or something ^.^" hehe
Arrivederci!
-Tigra- =^.^=

Very good. A few spelling mistakes, but the words flow beautifully.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Sad and beautifully worded...