This is so hilarious! I laughed from the very first line!
-Isis

haha! That was funny! Good job! Please come read my pirate poem sometime!

TeeHee! Pretty good, but I have one itsy bitsy nit-pick: the rhythmn is a bit lacking. But otherwise, it was good and it gave me a good laugh! ^_^

Nice poem ust wondering where did you get the idea of mormon?

This made absolutely no sense; but it was funny and I liked it! Keep it up.

Are you making fun of mormons, or did you just put it in because Mexican and Mormon are alliterations?

LOL! Geek! What grade did you get?

I take it there out in italy. This was cool. I think that Dr. Seuss would be very, very proud. Especially in the use of the word "Bamboozled"

I got so lonely I have to review my own story. I really just wanted to see at least one review.
Laura Please find me!!!