 Victor 2002-06-04 . chapter 1 "Wavelets" reminds me of the ripple effect, which is the logo of my church in MI. And Tide reminds me of doing the laundry. |
 Ellerfru 2002-06-02 . chapter 1Cool! Dunno what else to say |
 xox Sanura 2002-02-11 . chapter 1Awsome poem, i love the sea ^_^ I surf, lol. Good job! Gosh you have posted a lot since i checked! Sarah's got a busy day ahead of her . . .
Rina-san ~ |
 Meghanna Starsong 2002-01-21 . chapter 1It's good. I really do like it. I've never seen the ocean before. But, there's one thing. It seems to be too brief to me. > |
 mandi 2002-01-17 . chapter 1 o, o! hehe! ur so good! my poems suck, but urs r great, don't stop writin! |
 AmandaPanda 2002-01-02 . chapter 1I like this! It's good! :-) |
 sams nitemare 2002-01-01 . chapter 1 solid
corny, yet good
slippery writing
sliding into no emotions
falling, crashing
ADD MORE....... poeticness |