pretty

it's not bad, different from the others but not bad, u can actually write good haikus; most people are *ehh* but you are truly talented at it

JA

Hiya! O this is a really good haiku! 'glittering clouds' is my favorite part

cya )

Winged Girl

Nah, I don't do flames (unless someone REALLY ticks me off-but I'm not here to write about that) I like how you describe the clouds as glittering. *sees glitter...chases after it*

I cant say anything bad about this poem,. Some awsome poems are written in school, yours is no exception.

k, um...what's that got to do with a shattering window, i prepared for a big heartbreaking depressing thing, and i get this happiness? what's the world coming to? then again, you wrote it in mah class... nothing good comes from math class, besides graduation...anywho, it was a very good haiku, considering math class...

Awesome piece.

Heart of the Sword

I don't get it, but I like the wording. :P

great, 'glittering clouds' like this best, shattering windows can be beautiful *g*

maths class sux but this poem is ok

it's so pretty! crystalline's a cool word.

May be short, but still good!

Good imagery. Shattering windows ARE beautiful.

Wow.. so short and yet so great! :) I loved that.. :) You are such a great writer! And you seem like a pretty cool person. If you ever want to talk just drop me an E-Mail at You seem like an interesting person.. :) So don't hesitate to e-mail me!

rainbow crystalline... nice...