|Reviews for shattering window|
| Morwain 5/3/06 . chapter 1
| Loup17 4/12/05 . chapter 1
it's not bad, different from the others but not bad, u can actually write good haikus; most people are *ehh* but you are truly talented at it
| Emi Amara 11/9/03 . chapter 1
Hiya! O this is a really good haiku! 'glittering clouds' is my favorite part
| Zainab 6/3/03 . chapter 1
Nah, I don't do flames (unless someone REALLY ticks me off-but I'm not here to write about that) I like how you describe the clouds as glittering. *sees glitter...chases after it*
| just like me 5/7/03 . chapter 1
I cant say anything bad about this poem,. Some awsome poems are written in school, yours is no exception.
| la presa de la noche 12/17/02 . chapter 1
k, um...what's that got to do with a shattering window, i prepared for a big heartbreaking depressing thing, and i get this happiness? what's the world coming to? then again, you wrote it in mah class... nothing good comes from math class, besides graduation...anywho, it was a very good haiku, considering math class...
| Keep it 100 12/15/02 . chapter 1
Heart of the Sword
| Karianua Lightwood 10/14/02 . chapter 1
I don't get it, but I like the wording. :P
| hoellenwauwau 8/11/02 . chapter 1
great, 'glittering clouds' like this best, shattering windows can be beautiful *g*
| wqwq 8/10/02 . chapter 1
maths class sux but this poem is ok
| moonbunny38 5/27/02 . chapter 1
it's so pretty! crystalline's a cool word.
| Laralanthalasa 5/26/02 . chapter 1
May be short, but still good!
| lady alpha 5/20/02 . chapter 1
Good imagery. Shattering windows ARE beautiful.
| Endless Tears 5/19/02 . chapter 1
Wow.. so short and yet so great! :) I loved that.. :) You are such a great writer! And you seem like a pretty cool person. If you ever want to talk just drop me an E-Mail at You seem like an interesting person.. :) So don't hesitate to e-mail me!
| playergurl 5/19/02 . chapter 1
rainbow crystalline... nice...