Wow! This is interesting, sounds really good! Let me know as soon as you add something up to this, okie? :)

I liked it. It was very interesting and in the very slightest of ways angst. The first few lines made me think of this book called 'The Giver' which is pretty much a classic, so you've probably read it at some point. What were you thinking of when you wrote this? I'm curious because it was almost poetic. Alyson Grant @)--