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Vinsant Firepsyched 2003-03-13 . chapter 6
This is rather cool. I do believe however that you can actually fit some of the short "ugly" poems and possibly make something beautiful out of it. But your idea of putting a collection is nice. Even though it's not all that ugly.
vixxy 2002-12-12 . chapter 14
wow. i can SOO relate to this sometimes.
CrimsonCat 2002-11-19 . chapter 12
I think this one is my favorite.
Dai stiho
~CrimsonCat~
CrimsonCat 2002-11-19 . chapter 7
Just wanted to say that I loved those last two lines. Well done.
Dai stiho
~CrimsonCat~
CrimsonCat 2002-11-19 . chapter 15
That happens to me a lot. You just write, and you're left wondering what the hell you've created. Don't worry, it's not just you.
Beautiful poems, by the way. Adding them to my fav. list. Keep up the great work.
Dai stiho
~Crimsoncat~
one two three four five 2002-04-14 . chapter 15
no i write stuff and don't understand it all the time. i think it's pretty common. it comes from somewhere inside you that you didn't think you had. and that's that. later, you wonder. did that make sense? prolly not.
one two three four five 2002-04-14 . chapter 2
home life, thank you please.
SweetGrape 2002-03-23 . chapter 5
nicely true
Bitterscarlet (sign in? what?) 2002-02-16 . chapter 16
I haven't been on ff.net for ages. Nothing to contribute plus the page wouldn't load. Anyway, now I'm on this short visit I'd like to say: Poem quite good, could be expanded a bit. Back to diaryland for me...
Jaclyn 2002-01-27 . chapter 15
WOW. I'm stunned...I've read these before, but I came back to see the new ones..."Painfully Untitled" just about blew my mind...WOW! I've also written things that are total puzzles to me (*is thinking about her latest poem*), or things that express extreme emotions (depression, etc) that I don't feel (yeah, I've realized that those are probably about other people though, since I'm positive they're not about me). But I digress...your poem is AMAZING. I really, really love it....it's perfect. Wow...
Bitterscarlet 2002-01-15 . chapter 14
Fall of the wall is indeed brilliant.
vixxy 2002-01-12 . chapter 9
I like the Fall of the Great Wall.
vixxy 2002-01-12 . chapter 7
Combine the three Fragments of Heat.
Jaclyn 2002-01-11 . chapter 12
wow. wow! i LOVED these! some of them really blew me away. im putting this on my favorites...great job! and you shouldnt say they're bad in the summary, because i *almost* didn't read them bc of that...
Kritik 2002-01-11 . chapter 7
Now this one I like..lovely imagery.
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