interesting.. but i didn't understand line 5

Your perceptibility in this is so wonderful!

That one is one to make you think. I like it a lot. -Susaki Yuchi

the poem tells about the truth. you should read this. i like it very much.

I loved your poem!It was so sweet , and it was touching to reality because it told the truth! I liked the way you talked about famous legends , and how they aren't was just really sweet and I can't find any other way to describe it!