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| equitable division 2003-12-24 ch 1,  | abuseHaha. I'd review in Haiku if I was bright and quick witted. My last sentance kinda rhymed though.. |
| ali-kat-29 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abusegreat haiku! but is it a one? or three> technicly, it's three, and i heard that haikus HAVE to have something to do with nature. it's a rule or something or other. but it's very funny. :) a.c |
| Cindy Smith 2002-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi my name is Cindy Smith and I am gay too! Want to hook up sometime? I know where you live because I live right down the street. I am in SO love with you! Will you fook me on our first date? I've had losts of experience!!!!! With other women of course. just like you! If John Knowles wasn't dead you and him would get along just fine I bet. you might still actually. Love you more than you will EVER EVER know! I'm gay! Cindy Smith |
| Sarathiel 2002-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI find it so amusing that hordes of people attack the Haiku Police for their horrendous flames via horrendous flames. There appear to be a number of stupid . . . jerks around here, and I'm not talking about THP. They're funny jerks, and that makes all the difference. Loved the haiku. ;) |
| Katterree Fengari 2002-08-06 ch 1, | abuse...hmm...Oo..So you CAN write several Haiku's as to lengthen them....fun....interesting poem....ur refering yourself as several ppl...ok! .... |
| Firebolt -2002 2002-07-27 ch 1, | abuseyou'll are seriously not anything more than ordinary... plain and simple. god knows which imbecile told you you could write. p.s don't review anyone 'coz you should know, YOU'RE WORSE |
| Raspberry Ginger 2002-05-24 ch 1, | abuse*crying with laughter* God, I already had a sore throat, you know?! You're makin' it worse! Jesus, you people are gonna be screwed over and over! Why in the freak do you care? You're just settin' yourselves up for flames! |
| Nakato Rune 2002-04-05 ch 1, | abuseCute. What is it about all these people and "Flames"? Not the criticism! Whatever shall we do? If you want to write a poem, but the haiku form is just too restricting, you can write a poem and post it in Original Poetry--not Haiku! |
| LunarBard 2002-03-27 ch 1, | abuseLOL!!!:} The last stanza was cute. |
| americananime 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abuseYou people are seriosly starting to give me mental stress! Arg! _YOU SHOULD HAVE TOLD US THAT IT WAS MORE THAN ONE_, since now you look like all those people you scold - more than seventeen syllables if you put it all together, so there. |
| Zemmiphobic 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abuselol love the twist it's awesome |
| Mephisto 2002-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHeheheheh. |
| worldofone 2002-03-01 ch 1, | abuse*giggles at Chelsea for all those spelling mistakes - Just for he Haiku Police* That's a lot of gifts..lol.. Good one, Bremmie. |
| GypsyQueen 2002-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abusePerfectly lovely, Words that are truely heart felt, It makes my heart swell. ~*GypsyQueen*~ |
| Imagi chan 2002-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI made a Haiku Just made it for you, police And I messed up this line. If you can count, as you love to proclaim, the last line has more syllables then it should. And theres nothin you can do about it, because I havent made it past kindergarden. Thanks for giving me your time, weather you chooose to or ya didnt! And every spellin mistake was just for you! |