Darn. Update will ya. I like this story. really interesting and all.

...aw...how sweet.

um...what's happenin'?

Ah! You must update! Must, must, must!

Ok here is the deal, I am now going to fail two of my classes because instead of doing my make up work I was reading your EXTREMELY ADDICTING story!...I hop you are happy now lol... I see it has been a LONG time since you last updated and I am reviewing (which i seldom do anymore...) to tell you that if you do not finish this story I will Huff and PUFF and BLOW YOUR HOUSE DOWN!...^-^;;
Oh just update already! I don't want to have to retake my courses for nothing! ;-;
love lots your admiring fan... yadda yadda yadda...

~Life Is My Cliche (aka Tara-chan the procrastanotor...who cant spell :D lol)

Hey! I was really getting into that! you need to write more!

This is beautifully written, and I really want to know how it ends!

scary. But I like it. Love the whole world thing. 'Wish you'd write more!