Not scary, and I didn't understand the robin-thingy.
Actually, I did understand it, and I don't think that you wrote what you had planned to write.
Oh well...

Beautiful....just....beautiful...

...dude, that rocked. I mean, whether or not it's true, I can't say, but it's very unique, and very disturbing in ways. A great piece of literature.

One of the best twists was the entity falling in love with He, the Creator. I mean, not simply loving in an Agape sense, but in a soulmate sense; Eros, even.

I once did something like this in a journal, but I had Æshram cast a spell on it so no one could read it. Maybe I should publish it on here sometime...