Wow, this is one of those stories that you find and hope is restored for the art of writing. I was seriously impressed. I loved how it was so complex and mysterious while being truely simple and ovbious at the same time.

Screwy and philosophical and weird, and I'm not sure I entirely understand it at the moment (so brain dead. school tends to do that to me), but I like it. Very interesting. Very different. And I like your writing style. It's very direct, very simple (in a good way), but doesn't hit you on the head. And really. Sally Campbell. Your work really needs to be taken as a whole, rather than as individual stories. Seriously. :-P

You honestly have left me speechless.

Interesting chapter. Very different from the previous. I like.

Another excellent installment...where do you come up with this **? It's ** amazing! I love it.Question, why call it "Don't Feed the Reaper" ?
“** man, how should I know? I’m just a ** janitor.” That made me laugh so hard I nearly ** myself.Well done.

ahaha!! Bloody ** awesome. I love it I love it. I suppose '** the reaper' would be a bad idea? LOL
Only thing...who's Tony? Did I miss something? "As she left, Tony watched the material of her robe hugging her hips tightly causing her to take short mincing steps, and giver her ** the definition of a **"
But I love the ** bit. Excellent.

Ok, already this story is ** awesome...I love it. On top of that, I love the song Don't Fear the Reaper by BOC...one of my favorites...Kick **. Can't wait to read the rest.

wicked story!

Hello- Really nice chapter. You have developed the characters very well, and I am interested in who this Sally Campbell girl is.

Hello- Awesome chapter build up here. Keep up the good work.

-blinks- This is so bizzare. I'm going to read more! :D I hope you're going to explain everything through the story!

Hello- Excellent descirptions here, Deacon. Its nice to see you writing again, and its cool. You are one of the horror oldies on the site, so am I. Ice Demon was my old name.

Hello- Excellent story, built up nicely. Though very messed up (twisted, sick) nicely done.

I haven't started reading yet, but I look a look at the names of the other chapters. I think I'm going to like this story. You just made my favourites list.
Your description of the reaper needs work. It is too impassionate and neutral. Conversation at home excellent. Wow, the whole home sequence is excellent.
The black teen mugged by the old lady: This is a great story.
The nun sequence: wow dude, you got potential and problems in equal amounts.
The ending: That is unreal. What can I say? This is without a doubt the best thing I have ever read on fiction press, and I read a lot here. This is 'go tell a friend' quality. This is steal it and keep it on cd quality.
You have made my day.

That was good. Kinda surreal too,although, you should fear the reaper. HAHAHAHAHA