That was deep, lovely, and touching. It was awesome.

Oh my God...! This is so touching, I think I'm going to cry... This is exactly how I feel about my best friend... Cept he didn't move away, he's still here with me, Thankfully. But this is so touching... Great job. I better shut up now before the libranain comes and asks me why I'm typing(I'm at skewl, hence the reason I'm not logged in.)

~*~ Krista Aya S.~*~

wow... that was touching

A poem does not have to rhyme to be good, I wrote a poem when my girlfriend broke up with me but I lost it last year. It was deep but suicidal in some sort. I don't think I could post it online even if I still had it. It rhymed :-P This is a good poem.
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"Fear of living on;
Natives getting restless now;
Mutiny in the air;
Got some death to do;
Mirror stares back hard;
Kill is such a friendly word;
Seems the only way,
for reaching out again" Metallica~ Welcome Home(Sanitarium)

::sniffu::
That was wonderful, Eve...non-rhyming poems usually have more depth to them, I think. ^_~

I like it, I really do