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| japanesexskeletons 2006-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat was hilarious. Very, very good. |
| l'oiseaujoli 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow that was great. XD I didn’t expect anything like that to happen...the story seemed very...like nonfiction, believable, you know? Then she turned into a guy... hahaha :P Only critique is that you spelled college ‘collage’, which is not an educational institution but a bunch of pictures pasted together...i assume you knew that, just spelled it wrong.Other than that, wonderful story :D Killer ending :D :D |
| diseased-cheekbones 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. I liked it.Well done! |
| Nienyalie 2005-02-16 ch 1, | abuse*laughs* Wonderful! I adored this, although it's not really "horror" in my eyes (although Lord knows waking up as a boy would be horrible >.>) I loved it! |
| soulwings 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Really good...I love the ending. Brilliant. Err...wonderful. Do you want me to keep going? |
| linzcat 2004-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcelently(spl.) written. it like the fact of the suspence. it was also nice 2 note the ending wasn't elabouralte (spl.) |
| Connor Triannes 2004-02-18 ch 1, | abuseHehe... I had a feeling that was going to happen. I wish I had grandparents like that! *hates being a girl* |
| princesss17 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abuseyou have quite a imagination. what kind of books do you read? they must be really bloody and gory to influence you like this |
| VoicesOfViolence 2003-10-21 ch 1, | abuseHaha! That was a great story. Well written! Poor Tina, although she seems to have outsmarted her grandparents. *snigger* |
| ShAdOwPuPpEt 2003-08-16 ch 1, | abusethats an interesting story |
| The Lady Artemis 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! Wonderful, wonderful story. This story has earned it's way to my favorites list. I'm very choosy who I put on that list, but this deserves it. Kudos! |
| Aktrise 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abuselol lol lol. this is a REALLY good story, humourous but kind of twisted. I like it alot!! R&R tears of silver everyone!! :) :) |
| zane 2003-04-03 ch 1, | abusethis story is so freaking HYSTERICAL. the ending made me laugh out loud, making everyone in the room with me give me strange looks. :D:D |
| Megan 2002-10-20 ch 1, | abuseHee! Silly little grandparents! Tricks are for prostitutes! |
| SweetEvil 2002-02-06 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHA!! I LOVE this! I read this a while ago and forgot to review (bad me) and had to re-read it. Still cracks me up at the end.. GREAT job! |