this is the second time Ive read this story and I must say I still love it!

Excellent read still, please do continue this story. :) We're still here a-listenin

righty. that was very confusing and the story, i must say, kinda went downhill after jet kissed micheal. that was a tad too random. the puppet and pepper thing was uber cute.

Huh No you cant do this to me i need to know what happens next... gah

I love your story.
SO much.
I can't wait to keep reading tomorrow.

xoxoxoxoxoxo,
Ty

I love it!

ok it wouldn't let me review the last chapter again, so I'll review on this one. Talk about your unexpected plot twist. I love it and would love to see more! *hinthint* update!


D.M.

so... i goofed :P and most of my review disappeared on the review page? I have more reading to do. You have been busy, and I evidently did not remember where I had left off. :)

I'll write more reviews as i read.

omg omg omg. I decided to come back here, and I checked my favorites... and you had a new chapter. I was overcome with joy! And you did not disappoint! This chapter makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) I

Okay, so I found this yesterday, spent most of the day reading it, went to school, came back, started reading again, and finished.
AND can't wait for an update!!
Want to see who this Jezzabelle is...

I know I'm a little late in reading this and realise you haven't updated in a while, but I really hope you haven't given up on it.

I like the way you've dealt with Michael and Davis' relationship. It developed at an appropriate pace, the interactions were sweet and the whole Rocky Horror Halloween thing made me smile. I'm also a fan of Jason’s, he just seems like a nice guy as weird as that sounds and I'm glad he was OK with Davis' sexuality. There are too many homophobic brothers on FP XD

Please finish this!

X-core

NICE! XD!

lol aw he blushes alot how cute :3! XD! ^_^!

wow i'm kinda likeing this storey so far :}!

Just curious, are you ever going to continue this? It is amazingly written, and I think I very much like Michael's fetishes... hehe.
You should continue, even if you're not really on fictionpress anymore, just because it's a waste for such an amazing story go go unfinished. Your writing is superb, and you've had me almost crying at least twice, as well as feeling an overall feeling of meloncholy for a while now.. That takes a lot of skill.

On another note, I hope you're having a great week! Please continue writing,