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| demonic-muses 2008-04-23 ch 28,  | abuseok it wouldn't let me review the last chapter again, so I'll review on this one. Talk about your unexpected plot twist. I love it and would love to see more! *hinthint* update! D.M. |
| demonic-muses 2008-04-23 ch 29, | abuseso... i goofed :P and most of my review disappeared on the review page? I have more reading to do. You have been busy, and I evidently did not remember where I had left off. :) I'll write more reviews as i read. |
| demonic-muses 2008-04-23 ch 20, | abuseomg omg omg. I decided to come back here, and I checked my favorites... and you had a new chapter. I was overcome with joy! And you did not disappoint! This chapter makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) I |
| Puffy Marshmallow 2008-04-23 ch 29, | abuseOkay, so I found this yesterday, spent most of the day reading it, went to school, came back, started reading again, and finished. AND can't wait for an update!! Want to see who this Jezzabelle is... |
| X-core 2008-04-03 ch 29, | abuseI know I'm a little late in reading this and realise you haven't updated in a while, but I really hope you haven't given up on it. I like the way you've dealt with Michael and Davis' relationship. It developed at an appropriate pace, the interactions were sweet and the whole Rocky Horror Halloween thing made me smile. I'm also a fan of Jason’s, he just seems like a nice guy as weird as that sounds and I'm glad he was OK with Davis' sexuality. There are too many homophobic brothers on FP XD Please finish this! X-core |
| kirarin242 2008-03-08 ch 4, | abuseNICE! XD! |
| kirarin242 2008-03-08 ch 3, | abuselol aw he blushes alot how cute :3! XD! ^_^! |
| kirarin242 2008-03-08 ch 2, | abusewow i'm kinda likeing this storey so far :}! |
| Tohru Daihikashousha 2008-02-26 ch 29, | abuseJust curious, are you ever going to continue this? It is amazingly written, and I think I very much like Michael's fetishes... hehe. You should continue, even if you're not really on fictionpress anymore, just because it's a waste for such an amazing story go go unfinished. Your writing is superb, and you've had me almost crying at least twice, as well as feeling an overall feeling of meloncholy for a while now.. That takes a lot of skill. On another note, I hope you're having a great week! Please continue writing, |
| iman1234 2008-01-15 ch 29, | abuseomg update soon cnat wait |
| winged anime angel 2007-10-19 ch 29, | abuseI love this story. I hope you udpate soon. |
| merrymowmow 2007-08-06 ch 29, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| diebyownhands 2007-07-05 ch 29, | abuseShould we be worried abotu this Woman? I really like this story and I can't wait for it to continue and see how it all turns out. The brain being like a fried egg in what was it pig fat? was amuzing to say the least. |
| EE 2007-06-01 ch 29, anon. | abuseDepressing chapter, but vaguely enticing and better character development. Can't wait to read more. |
| So You Hate Me 2007-04-22 ch 29, anon. | abuseHoly **, excuse my use of languege. This chapter was awesome though it was short. It's been so long, that I've forgotten half of the story pratically. Still, I loved it. Where were you? I really missed reading new chapters, and its gotten so interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter. |