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| firestar267 2007-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really touching and very well written. I feel so bad for Calvin and Nate :( well done. |
| summerxsteps 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseAll of your writing is beautiful. You are truly talented. :) |
| Kahlan 2006-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so SAD. *tear. But can I steal it anyway? just to post. I'll give you credit. I don't have a website just yet but I will. |
| glamorous-giggly-guy 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness, this is...very powerful... I'm slightly devastated,to be honest. Fantastic job. I usually shy from one-shots, however, this sucessfully portrays the history, depth, and emotional attachment I look to find from longer stories. Well done, hope to read more of your works. Cheers,Zac |
| atadobsessive5345 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked this alot. Twas well done and the characters developed well in a short space. Good job on it. ^_^ |
| Lifelike 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseSniffle. Sob. B-E-A-utiful. As so put by Bruce Almighty. Should have finished this, but beautiful nonetheless. |
| Goddess Of Imaginary Life 2005-01-25 ch 1, | abuse*jaw drops* O.M.G. *starts screaming: Stupid bastard* and other unintelligible words. I hate homhphobics! I really do. Oh, I liked that. Except the death. WHY! |
| rainbowskye 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI was reading it, thinking about how the bed scene was so sweet, how there was comfort in that horrible time but the ending.. it's so sad. Well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. |
| CynicallyOptimistic 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad. Such a lovely story. You are an amazing writer. The more I read the more I like it. |
| im-watching-u 2004-10-06 ch 1, | abusewow!! that was one of the best storys iv ever read. nice job. |
| Stefen 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG! That was so sad! I cried! You should write more like this! OMG! |
| akarane 2004-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGods- you're so talented. that was beautiful- and so, so heart wrenching. Outburst of emotions there... that whole scene hit something. ... I wish you would finish your writings a bit more often. They're all wonderful (well, at least those that I've read). ... randomly happy/excited (which hasn't happened in too long a while), thank you. May your writings take you to great places. Akarane |
| jaffacakes1987 2004-05-22 ch 1, | abuseOhh...so good! Had me captured till the very end : ) |
| WhisperElmwood 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abuseBloody fantastic. |
| Lestat de Lioncourt 2003-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this is such a powerful story! Youre from IA? Me too! *sobs* I am too emotional. I was bawling my eyes out here! Keep up your work, JMB~Lestat |