This is really touching and very well written. I feel so bad for Calvin and Nate :( well done.

All of your writing is beautiful. You are truly talented. :)

This is so SAD. *tear. But can I steal it anyway? just to post. I'll give you credit. I don't have a website just yet but I will.

Oh my goodness, this is...very powerful... I'm slightly devastated,to be honest. Fantastic job. I usually shy from one-shots, however, this sucessfully portrays the history, depth, and emotional attachment I look to find from longer stories.

Well done, hope to read more of your works.

Cheers,Zac

I liked this alot. Twas well done and the characters developed well in a short space. Good job on it. ^_^

Sniffle. Sob.

B-E-A-utiful. As so put by Bruce Almighty. Should have finished this, but beautiful nonetheless.

*jaw drops* O.M.G. *starts screaming: Stupid bastard* and other unintelligible words. I hate homhphobics! I really do. Oh, I liked that. Except the death. WHY!

I was reading it, thinking about how the bed scene was so sweet, how there was comfort in that horrible time but the ending.. it's so sad. Well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.

That's so sad. Such a lovely story. You are an amazing writer. The more I read the more I like it.

wow!! that was one of the best storys iv ever read. nice job.

OMG! That was so sad! I cried! You should write more like this! OMG!

Gods- you're so talented.
that was beautiful- and so, so heart wrenching. Outburst of emotions there... that whole scene hit something.
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I wish you would finish your writings a bit more often. They're all wonderful (well, at least those that I've read).
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randomly happy/excited (which hasn't happened in too long a while), thank you. May your writings take you to great places.
Akarane

Ohh...so good! Had me captured till the very end : )

Bloody fantastic.

Wow, this is such a powerful story! Youre from IA? Me too! *sobs* I am too emotional. I was bawling my eyes out here!

Keep up your work,
JMB~Lestat