Wow, that was awesome! I loved the bizarre twist in the end. :)

...wow, very interesting

Hehe...

That's nice.

It has a touch of funniness, and is cool sounding, too.

I've always admired people who can write poem stories. This is really cool.

If you want to see another really good epic poem/ballad of fantasy, check out The Downfall of Lord Soriss, by Evil Grinlord. It's good too.

Keep up the writing.

_Ahrar