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| her.harlequin.masquerade 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abuse"This is for all the people who want us to write something NOT about ourselves." *Laughs* I'm going to have to disagree. It's still about you. Note that in the first line of the second stanza, you refer to yourselves by saying "all of us", and that in the second line of the third stanza you say "all we can say is that our..", once again, indirectly referencing yourselves. Nice try, but once again you lack the ability to be anything other than self obsessed. Now THAT'S constructive critisim. ~Charlie |
| Amaranth of Grey 2005-04-14 ch 1, | abuseDude, read my haikus.I'm SweetExile. I can't count.Respond, and then, laugh. |
| REAL haiku police 2005-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuse"Haikus" and "Haiku" are both accepted in the English language as the plural. Ignore the other people who are as weird as this poem. |
| Katterree Fengari 2002-08-06 ch 1, | abuse....Ooo...yep...strange....^_^ |
| Raspberry Ginger 2002-05-24 ch 1, | abuse*falls off chair* Oh sweet Jesus and his Virgin Mother! ** me, will you? It's too good. |
| Sugars Daring Mistress 2002-03-28 ch 1, | abuseOoookay...not sure what that one is...*tries to think of a good word* Oh! I know! It was RANDOM!! ^_^ |
| peachykeen 2002-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha that was great. i liked it. thanks for salutin me haiku police!! its tricky tricky tricky tricky... |
| ~*GypsyQueen*~ 2002-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseTruthfully dear ones, I didn't quite get this one, Perhaps I'm sleepy. *looks at clock* Oh my! It is 5:30! Egad! *dissolves into a shadowy mist* |
| BeautifulWickedness 2002-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was real cute! I have a question: Who are you people?! How many of you are there? How old are you? I'm so confused! |
| Jennifer Jolie 2002-02-10 ch 1, | abuseFunny. : ) Altho I slightly feel it's cheating since you get to add so many random's in. Not fair. ; ) |
| Anni 2002-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think you need to think of a new word. Their are more words that mean the same thing as weird than their are for random. I agree with Ms. Lester, your haiku are weird. |
| Radical Child 2002-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWTF KIND OF WORD IS HAIKUS? LAY OFF MY POETRY DIRT BAG! |
| WVirginU2007 2002-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI (one person) agree with my friend Amymimi (one person). You people (roight! still one person **, sorry) are not very normal. But we are the ones with the problems, i forgot! |
| Amymimi 2002-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAre "we" being schitzophrenic, oh mighty AUTHOR name "The Haiku Police"? |
| Ellerfru 2002-01-12 ch 1, | abuse*g* Cool... |