Loved the poem. I thought it was extremely well written and it made me think, which I like, because I rarely think! BTW, I love your Pen Name because it contains 'Moloko' and my favorite band in the world is Moloko. I also noticed that you liked Tori Amos and David Bowie. Kudos for that! Tori is the ** and Bowie is beyond compare. lol, sorry for the many words so goodbye. again, nice job on the poem. :)
-ryan