|Reviews for Us|
| US 1/22/03 . chapter 1
I know, and I'm sorry
| FFF1 4/12/02 . chapter 1
It really sums up one of my so called friendships, it's excellent Valerie.
| Alethia 2/16/02 . chapter 1
I liked it. You put a lot of emotion into it, and I think that is what makes poetry good.
| the Queen of Jupiter 2/12/02 . chapter 1
Strong emotions in this poem come through clearly. Good job! :)
| Stretch 2/7/02 . chapter 1
cool, i liked it. seems like you had a strong relationship with this person, i know what its like to feel this way. and youve sparked the nail on the bonnet with that.
| McKay 2/6/02 . chapter 1
Straightforward, strong and thus very affecting.
| Interlude 1/31/02 . chapter 1
i am very shy... i hardly talk, i've never dated... and i don't know why. maybe it's because deep down i'm really just an insecure person, afraid of getting hurt. afraid that oneday a person that i thought cared for me, will just turn away and laugh. mostly that comes just with the thought of ever having a boyfriend... but i think the fact that about every single friend i've ever had i've lost touch with, them moving, me moving, might be there also. your poem was very strong, very beautiful, and so very true for so many people.
| allie cole 1/15/02 . chapter 1
Holy mother... I like! I like mostly your interactions with the same words that have different meanings..."I lost, I am lost without you" and so forth. Really interesting and it has a strong sense of independence. Beautiful, my friend! -ac-
| lisa 1/13/02 . chapter 1
i know how you feel, i feel like that alot. awesome poem! i tried to put mine on here but it didnt work for soem reason lol. strange. well anyways, im gonna go lol!
| Absentee 1/13/02 . chapter 1
I think a lot of people can relate to this work.
It is quite real, and I like that about it
and from the heart too.
And I think it makes a very clear statement, and I love it when the point of a story/poem is obvious.
Sue me if i am a simple man.
| Jonathan Bruce 1/12/02 . chapter 1
You speak for all of us who have had a nasty relationship where, in the end, we've been senselessly hurt by one we thought we loved. You are an artist with poetry. Keep it up, and you'll be getting checks in no time.
| Alendalian 1/10/02 . chapter 1
Yes... this is too true... especially for me... writing this kind of angry poetry really does something to me, and knowing that others exist with the same feelings as me make it all better, or mostly better... I know this feeling all too well, but then again, this does sound like the email I just sent you, and no need to rewrite it...
| Azaezel Coerrigan 1/10/02 . chapter 1
this is an awesome poem. Very very powerful and so sentimental. It really lays your feelings out there. Slight confusion and full forced understanding. I love it! I also love how a lot of the lines flow into each other and how some of the stanzas end with a combination of what makes them up. Awesome Job! :o)