The last two lines are so wonderful, so easy to relate to.

hey this poem was so good but also very sad. i hope you read my stuff it also has to do with love and stuff. R&R please. ttyl. Bye.



~Mike

I can feel how you felt while writing this... I can definitely relate to this. Very well written, captivating.

Wow, that was so sad and so good! I'm going to read more of your stuff 'cause GOD you're good! -Susaki Yuchi

That was so sad..and yet many people can relate to it , like me for instance.I'm curently going through a stage in my life where I reject my own romantic feelings and grind them to tiny little shreds.Good poem all the same!

lovely