 Rogue Knight 2002-01-12 . chapter 1I really fail to see any humorous substance, or indeed any kind of substance in this. There is simply nothing here. There is no plot, there are no characters, there is no point. There is, as I have pointed out, no humor, not even dark humor. At least it was extremely brief, for which I'm grateful. In the future, remember that violence and profanity are not funny in and of themselves, only when coupled with some kind of humorous incongruity. |