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Reviews For: I Would Kill To Be In That Social Circle
falling*star 2002-02-01 . chapter 1
hhmmmm... not so clear you should expand... still good just drunk and blury
Rogue Knight 2002-01-12 . chapter 1
I really fail to see any humorous substance, or indeed any kind of substance in this. There is simply nothing here. There is no plot, there are no characters, there is no point. There is, as I have pointed out, no humor, not even dark humor. At least it was extremely brief, for which I'm grateful. In the future, remember that violence and profanity are not funny in and of themselves, only when coupled with some kind of humorous incongruity.
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