Amazing ending.

Wow. Gimme shivers. Wait... So she's part of the gang? Or just paid to turn him in?And she dated an old guy?Dang, this sounds like a flame. It's not - this story is AWESOME.

Wow. Very interesting twist. You had a brilliant plot, and I think you could have developed it a little bit more, you kinda dropped off at a cliffhanger. It's a shame you couldn't just change this to a novel and... well, I won't lecture you on why you should enhance such a WONDERFUL and AMAZING and ASTONISHING and MARVELOUS idea. Well, *sigh*, even your short stories outdo everything I've ever written. *struck by jealousy--lol*

Your newest fan,
~*~Coley~*~

kind of depressing, but good.