the author says that the angst is coming. pashaw! i say there already is angst between the two. anyway, good luck on your test and plz update soon. >X3

omg! im going to kill you with all this angst that you put into this story. RAWR!

i really like your style in this story. but uh oh, time for a bed scene. hahaha

the big, birly dark seme to the smaller, lighter uke. good job of creating the characters this time. hahaha.

This is an interesting beginning but I noticed that it hasn't been updated for over three years. Are you ever going to finish it?

aw... hope you update soon!

Update! So many of your stories have great beginnings, but they're all too short! T_T

Great story so far. Keep up the great work*nods enthusiastically*

Must continue story. The characters are very good. Danyl is lovable. I must know what happens next.

Oh it is so good but will they ever do something i mean they clearly like each other. Great writing continue soon.




DM13

Oh my god, I just saw that it's been over a year since you updated this story! And that's such a shame because it's really really good! At least I think so and I just hope you'll continue with it!! Truth to tell I like it more than your other stories.. although I like them too :D Well, I guess I'll just wait and hope for an update :)
(and good luck with this project of yours if that's what's keeping you away from writing more ^^)

wonderful so far. i like that there isn't any inner dialogue, leaves it open to interpetaion and makes you think..
continue soon please.

Oh, come on! You can't leave me hanging like that! C'mon, write more! Please?

Cool! I didn't know you had your fics on FF.net! I was upset when I tried to go on your site and it was gone (did you move it?) So I was really glad that you have your stuff on here.

Update soon!!!!

*_* You MUST continue this story. I love it. I love Kei and Danyl (Danyl's so cute! ^_^). I love the detail of your world-building. I want moooore...I can see by the updates it's been a few months, but still...

The more subtle style is also working well, I think. Although it's pretty obvious that Dany's got a cru~sh. ^____^

Anyways, I'm very impressed. Aside from a few grammatical errors, this story is great so far and I really hope I'll see more.

(...yes, I write gushing reviews. So what?)

--Naoko