WHAT? Tell me that isnt the end. It dint round up the things with Manni and Jason. I mean jason and manni both like her but who is she choosing?

Sequel?
It dint feel like the end. Nothing even really happened...

This chapter rounds up alot of little points in the story, i like how its not always predictable, i mean Jason likeing her and then her liking him back just seem unrealistic if that was all there was to the story. Plus adding Manni in made it less cliche, cos usually its always new boy meets girl and they suddenly go out etc. But really, in reality it may be more likely to be someone u knew for some time already i.e. Manni

Jason is always concerned about her feelings towrds him. I think that makes him quite real, instead of trying to impress her 24/7, he's catering to her quite a bit. And she is just a funny little person who is kind of a gold-digger but not haha

She's abit overdramatic...i mean i thought she wanted to show her high school past people that she had become accomplished yada yada, why cant she just pretend and rub into people's face that she got marriesd? She did say Jason was cute before, i think.

Sometimes the flow isnt right, like eg. And it's too late since he already paid for his ticket. ** ** **.

I mean, if she pretends to be married, thats all there is. Pretend, nothing monstrous will happen like they have to kiss in front off ppl and stuff...Seems unrealistic that she is to melodramatic.

wow you so deserve more reviews. I really enjoyed your story and your writing, so much that I'm actually writing a review which I rarely (never) do.

I'm going to end this with the ever so lame and unoriginal (but very sincere):
keep up with the writing

I like the detail of her personality, like the way she always has to have noise surrounding her. Shes kinda like got a life of stuff just stuffed into it, well trying to keep herself busy anyway,

Erratic things like dropping groceries onto floor and breaking her eggs and stuff, description that isnt linear and small disruptions in what shes doing. Things like these make the story more interesting to read, instead of an endless drone of drabbles and lengthy overstuffed descriptions of how the trees are green and skies are blue and blah blah blah.

Good work, got some funny parts too

The morning kiss with hair tuck! It was a surprise, and the morning after scene is diff from previous stuff i read. Thank heavens for not being cliched =)

a little quriky- but very very cute and well done ^_^

Really amazing story- it was written so incredibly well that you could believe the characters were actually real. I like how you dealt with Manni and Rowena's love for each other, how you ended it with her and Jason. Very open-ended, and fantastic!

Okay, finally, there's a story that actually pulls off dry humor well. really great story. I LOVED Rowena's character.

Fantastic

Alright, first and foremost, I love your characters. Alcoholism and sarcasm and anger and all, they are witty and meanly charming. The ending, at first, confused me, for about ten seconds. I mean, the loose end bit. But, I'm glad that it didn't end with Rowena taking her pick of a guy out of the two and then living happily ever after, because that would have really ruined the entire thing, in my opinion at least. After the initial ten seconds, I realized that the ending suited everything very well. Anyway, I just wanted to compliment you on your writing style and your plot and your wit and all of that great stuff :)

Oh my god it's finally finished!!?!! That was a really sweet ending. Things are kind of in the air. I don't know what Rowena's going to do about Manni and/or Jason. But I like the ending, in that there isn't an obvious, clear-cut decision. I like the mention of Jason and Tweety during the heckling - he's such a sweetie. :) Wow, I have to say congratulations for finishing the story. It's been a long damn time coming! *lol* And I also have to say THANK YOU! Thanks for sticking with it and finally getting it done :) And for introducing me to the awesome characters. Now I kinda hope you start up with Green Gable again *g* And other stories!! Haha, don't panic - if you can finish one you can finish others! And you're an inspiration to me to finish more, too *G* WHO!

*lol* It sounds like such a cosy evening...

Yes, reading on!! ;)