Aw cutes! ^.^ Though I do feel that you could have made it longer... anywho, great story! Oi... it's possible to have sex that much? Wouldn't his butt be like... raw and bleeding? O.O XP Loved it! Keep up the good work! ^.^

~360~

Hahahah> meddling old woman. Great shtuff.

Hahahaha. Trapdoor all over again.

Bwahahahah! What about all that stuff that Jasper had brought with him? Is he just going to leave it in the hotel? And didn't Aleksy see it? It had been right on the bed.

So quickly falling in love! My goodness! The description was good, the heat was a very nice touch, and the end held a cleverly disguised sappiness. Wonderful!

^__^

The time was 11:36 PM, and everyone who was someone would be there, dancing, singing, moving, being felt up, being lifted up, tipping wine glasses bottoms up, retreating to dark corners and shooting up.(Made me laugh)Wanker (made me laugh)

Haha. I like the saucy tone you've got with this fiction. Goes along with the story. Great job on this part. The descriptions are sometimes hard to follow and the looks to hair color (specially on Aleksy) have a distinct anime feel to them. Hahahaha. nice job.

it was a good part, but I thought the long dialogue at the beginning was the story and almost turned away.

niceness. I lurve yaoi, and you just made my day. ^_^ Thanks!

Lol, very anit-climatic. ^^ But great all the same!

Vey cute story!! I like them. They're cool. ^_^

great story ^-^ simple as

~Sakuri

i hav to agree with u about muses being pains in the **! innit a killer? ^-^ lol great start, its really funny. u hav a good writing style, and i already luv Jasper. im faving this story ^-^

~Sakuri

Heheh, absolutly adorable. I love the climax-less ending. I actually caught the HP reference! **dances**

Heheh, I wish I was an assasin. You should write some more about them...or tell us what Aleksy does to make all that money.

Their description of a let down really doesn't help people think highly of the end of your story. It's as if you are suggesting that this is a letdown itself.

You wrote that well. I liked the lines: 'Aleksy grinned, patting her on the back. "You’ll find someone," he said cheerily, then dropped his voice low, almost to a whisper. "Sid…Sid…Sid…"' It's a nice side to the character. Jasper the uh.. assassin hiding behind a column is doubtful, but ok none the less.