Ooh. Love it!

TST

Love it. Angels, evil, philosophy—what more can one ask for? And it's well-written, too! The 'twisted smile' was pretty disturbing . . . and last two sections are powerful. In the second-to-late, though, the asterisks kept throwing me off. >.

WOW!!! Unbelievable. You captured the characters so well. I love their voices. Each was so unique, I can see them as real people (angels;) ). Definitely keep up the awesome work.

Fascinating story! Very thought-provoking, and very powerful.
Have you read Milton's Paradise Lost?

Beautifully written. Really intelligent. Thought provoking. Well designed. Neat structure and pacing. Touching, too, with all those emotions just beneath the surface as well as the ones vividly painted out.
**Smattering of applause**
Please excuse me while I go threaten some minions...
**Standing ovation**
...that's better.

Oh...*damn* I like this. I have a serious angel-thing, and introspective conflicted angels and not-evil Lucifer are always good. Not to mention that this is beautifully written. *Very* nice.

wow. this is quite thoughtful. i'm not good at these review things either..but this is just..wow. its a work of art. thank you. lol

Feckin hell! That was really really awesome! You got the emotions amazingly well, and it seriously makes you think. Rebellion forever and may the Force be with you... Hang on, have I just contradicted myself again?

Yieah! I like it. It's...poingient I think the word is, very much bittersweet and beautiful...*and now I think I'll go reread Paradise Lost again, if I can find it.*

** ... that's fantastic. God that's good. You nearly had me in tears, Random. Wow, really heart rending/thought provoking/other discriptors that I can't spell ...

stunning story.... very effective, especiaily when read in the middle of the night listening to Death In Vegas. there are people falling over left, right and centre, even though i have no real claim to have them fall over, since they rarely enter my head. ach.
blue skies...

*sobs* Oh, that was wonderful...I really enjoyed it.

I love the symmetry of beginning and end, if tha makes sense..*sniff*

Sorry, it's just me. But it's great anyway, even if it does make Michael, Gabriel, Remiel and Lucy fall over. And I hadn't read the bit at the end (CUTE!). So, yeah.
Nice one.