I just need to tell you... You might want to put something there about how if he had told her that he loved her, maybe she wouldn't have died. It's just a suggestion.

Good story.........however........guys usually do not think in that aspect. In our Western society and some other societies, guys generally do not act in the way as the boy did in your story. Maybe, he was different, but I thought I would point it out.......delete this review if you want if you think it's a flame......it's not......just thought I would let you know........but still it was sweet.

NICELY twisted ending! Gotta love standing in the rain too...Did it last night.

That was prodigious. I don't understand all of it but, prodigious.

So sad...my heart aches. How horrible it would be to see one of the most beautiful things in your life die before your very eyes...keep up the work.