ooo...me like the new guy! but how do you pronounce ghent's name?

just to let you know, you have some kind of text mess-up. I like the story....the second chapter doesn't seem as... developing as the first. does that make sense? I just got more of a feel for the character in chapter 1. Love it!

Please tell me there's more to this? I loved it. You ever want someone to pre-read, I'll do it (Not much on grammer and spelling but I'm great whith plot holes)

Very good! I'd like to hear more

I like the way your dialogue blends into the story. I always have trouble with that. I'll look for more chapters!