that was amazing. thanks

Gah! ::faints:: I lurv stories that contain these three elements; history, slash, and witty conversation. Thank you for having all three. It saves me time.

Yes! Very hot! Loved it-do more! This is going on my fave's list! *fawns all over story* lol

Greatly enjoyed your puns about Maecenas. ^_^ And I love to see the personality of these two historical characters developing so naturally under my eyes. Octavius *uses* his charm, that is true, and Agrippa..well, you made him charmingly passionate and truly convincing...that might explain some of the things he did when considerably older.;-)

This is brilliant, only thing is i have to read antony & cleo for class and i'm gonna be constantly imagining ag & oct making out in the background.

I ::heart:: Octavius...

This was very well done. The characterization style is good, a lot of showing with very little telling.

Well done! [BTW, I'm an history geek too, and I absolutely loved this one!]