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| Ansketil 2005-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful! This little story taken with your other Octavianus oriented story is simply delightful. ID AMO! ID AMO! ID AMO! The idea of Augustus and Marcus Agrippa together is... interesting to say the least... but you write it in an absolutely believable way. I can't wait to hear what M. Agrippa has to say about Gussie's platform sandals! Please continue! I'm longing to see how you portray Caesar... I agrre that you were right to use Latin terms. They're easier. Vale. |
| crystal 2005-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove it! I hope you wrote more soon, I love these stories. I liked the other one too...{I'm too lazy to review...~_^} Crys |
| Lawrence of Arabia 2004-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw..nice. except that I don't see a couple of adolescents talking like that; even if the story takes place in antiquity. Good story, but they sound like they're much older than they are. |
| Val Mora 2004-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseI actually know very little about the historical figures you've written about, but I like what you wrote, even though I don't have knowledge enough to understand the situation quite as well as someone who did know their history might. Your narrative style is gorgeous, and your characters are believable. |
| Maeve Riannon 2003-01-31 ch 1, | abuseAre you an Ancient History geek? Me too! Me too! I never had the idea of writing any story about Octavius and Agrippa, but you did it, it seems, and the outcome is admirable. Often I wondered about their friendship, that later was so spoiled by political matters, and I´m glad to see here such a gorgeous, accurate and well researched rendition of their story. Thanks, again. |