i dont know how u do it but i always seem 2 be crying at the end of your poems lol very, very beautiful! the fact that its so personal only makes it even more powerful and awesome... i love it!

I can relate the story of your saviour to our real Saviour, and I think...that it is him... It's an amazing poem. I don't know how you did that. How do you put such images in a person's mind and make them feel as if they're "you"? They're just... just the topics of the poem, the way that you word it, it's just ingenious. I've never been moved by poems such as these. And I don't get moved by poetry. I don't get moved. Period. =P They're amazing, really. I hope you keep on writing stuff like this. Cya

Aw, you're such a great person (well from reading your fics xD)... I'm glad you didn't die.

Beautiful, remarkable, the best in a while, meanings are deep. May life treat you well.

My God, that was incredible. I should print this off and pin it to my fridge. Then maybe my parents will get what Hell I'm going through...

I know exactly how this feels and I'm sorry that you had to go through it too...this is a great poem and it does express a lot of pain, but also love. Amazing!

That was a bit morbid... but it had a ?sugary? theme about it. I liked the dedication at the end as well. WD

wow, that was powerful. MTTM xx

I don't know what to say... I've enver really felt like this... but i can imagine what it would do to someone. I feel sort of bad, because know I'm wondering about someone... I like this selflessness ** at the end... how you stay alive for someone else...
If this is a true story then i seriously ** feel for you.

This poem really speaks to me and is really intriguing.

Very good! I love it. This poem would be like me if I ever tried suicide, I mean could you go threw that? Never knowing what could happen, you could be famous! Very nice it's on my favs.

Wow... This is absolutely amazing...

You've described everything... every feeling... so amazingly well.

This is really excellent work. I'm glad you were saved that day :-)

That was so sad! I used to feel full of emptiness but it left. It was amazing!

Amen.

Wow, that was amazingly well written; major props for you! You're very lucky to have had someone there to save you, and thank God they did! If you had died, the world would have lost a very talented writer. Well done, keep up the good work!