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Reviews For: Darkness

Munku-JGSPTV
2002-09-10
ch 1,
abuseShorter than your other ones, but still really good I love all these lines:
Dark clouds roll into the sky,

tempests break into the sea.

Fires rage along the country side,

thunder booms on top of me.

Rain pours down in icy currents,

wind howls in a ghostly song.

The darkness has come.
-ok, so I love the whole poem!
Poison Tea
2002-01-21
ch 1,
abusehehe both me and fusion elegy are becoming broken records. all we can say is great!! very good!! oh well. it's true though.
Myra Behley
2002-01-16
ch 1,
abuseI envy your writing talents!
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