I don't like this story. It has a promising potential in it's buildup, but at the end, it's simply anticlimatic. If it were a true story, then I'd appreciate the anecdote. BUT, I realize you wrote this for school, and probably did not care/have time to carve out a longer, more engaging story. So all that considered, it's aiite.

was ur sn because of this or was this because of ur sn?

uh...kay? lolz, that wuz interesting. by the way, y'd u change ur penname?

Dat's such a cute story! I wish i had a bunny...

awww poor bunny! hehe very cute!