This was good i love fire it is an amazing element and you descrobed it's beauty well

it was different...sounds awesome though! =)

-deadicated

I had this phase, when I was younger. I would turn on the stove, grab a napkin and light it on fire. I would then run to the sink and put it under the running water. So scary, but I couldn't stop. Fire is my favorite element, it's just... I'm not even sure. I used to just smell the smoke after I use to light the napkins on fire, my fascination and curiosity was strond during that time.

This is different from your other stuff, even I can notice that and I'm incapable of understanding poetry. Good job though, it left a nice image in my head.

That was...magical. I loved the images you created to go with the idea of 'fire;' they were much more accurate and original than the usual melodramatic spam...Especially the bits about smoke rings and death. I suppose I'm feeling morbid today.

Wow, I love that! I could almost feel the room getting warmer...

hiya! different style but still really good! nice ideas!
cya =)


-winged girl

Beautiful writing style, even on the darker ones. I love the way you describe things, and how your views are deep. Thanks for the reviewing you did on a few of my poems. Review the rest of you have time! Thanks a bunch!

Another one of your angsty poems... Somehow it always turns out gothis when you try to write about fear, doesn't it?

I really like this one alot. Its got really nice imagery and discription. Very well done.

Wow! It's great, u express ur feelings really well. Even though I can't really agree w/ them, I must say that u r good at this writing style too. I've read only a few of ur haikus, but this poem, even though it is quite different, reminds me of them. By the way, thx for reviewing "Die Zeit". I had been working on the subject for a while when I eventually came up w/ this, but I had never read any other poems about time before. But time is such a wierd concept that I guess many people can't keep themselves from writing about it. At least, that was my case.

I like this writing style. One of your best works! I love fire, not when it's near me of course ^^ I like how you describe fire with dragons and kisses and the such. Awesoem! It could be a fantasy type poem as well!

Ohh, cool!! nice pun lol. i had a dream like this last night.

I liked this, it was different then your regular haiku's. Don't get me wrong, I love your haiku's to.

I like that. It's an interesting, yet beautiful way to describe your worst fear... (Maybe not your WORST fear, but you know what I mean) I like this. It's always good to try something new. Wait. I take that back. it's not ALWAYS good, but...onvm. I'm going in over my head!!!!!!

~Auroa Barrett~

darn, I was gonna send you lots of fire as a present but you said no.... Izza good poem... I like fire....