interesting

hi! oh, this is cool, morning and dawning ryhme! nice ending too,
cya =)



- winged girl

I don't quite understand this one. I#m stupid.

Cool transition from the second line to the last line.

Oh, that was really good. (Sorry my reviews suck...) I liked it

wow. this is so beautiful, so simple, but what a wonderful way to describe a moment. I love your poetry!
T.S.

I don't see it as depressing at all. It does have many meanings. Wait. I change my mind. It can be slightly depressing depending on how you read it. I'm reading it over and over as I read this. They say haikus are primarily written about seasons, but I think they're good for topics which don't require many words. Or things you don't have many words for. Newayz. Not gonna waste your time with my babblings. Newayz.. I like this. Excellent work.

~Aurora Barrett~

double meanings? ok. um....oh, i think i get it. yes, i was warned. i like this haiku.

Pure elegance. I am in awe. You have astounding insight and a talent for sharing it with the world.

I put you on my fav. authors list, so I'll be back.

a little depressing, I must say. But lovely as usualy.

future is always depressing

it pretty and a little depressing but hey the future is depressing.. see ya kari

what can i say? yet another great poem.

Neat one! This one makes me think of Oracles and such. Keep writing!!

Lovely...you're great. BTW, thanks for reviewing my stuff ^_^