|Reviews for Future|
| Morwain 5/3/06 . chapter 1
| Emi Amara 11/8/03 . chapter 1
hi! oh, this is cool, morning and dawning ryhme! nice ending too,
- winged girl
| agny 11/8/03 . chapter 1
I don't quite understand this one. I#m stupid.
| Zainab 6/5/03 . chapter 1
Cool transition from the second line to the last line.
| just like me 5/7/03 . chapter 1
Oh, that was really good. (Sorry my reviews suck...) I liked it
| toysoldier 3/8/03 . chapter 1
wow. this is so beautiful, so simple, but what a wonderful way to describe a moment. I love your poetry!
| Aurora Barrett 2/21/03 . chapter 1
I don't see it as depressing at all. It does have many meanings. Wait. I change my mind. It can be slightly depressing depending on how you read it. I'm reading it over and over as I read this. They say haikus are primarily written about seasons, but I think they're good for topics which don't require many words. Or things you don't have many words for. Newayz. Not gonna waste your time with my babblings. Newayz.. I like this. Excellent work.
| la presa de la noche 12/19/02 . chapter 1
double meanings? ok. um...oh, i think i get it. yes, i was warned. i like this haiku.
| Pretty Barn Owl 10/13/02 . chapter 1
Pure elegance. I am in awe. You have astounding insight and a talent for sharing it with the world.
I put you on my fav. authors list, so I'll be back.
| Lady Tenjin 10/5/02 . chapter 1
a little depressing, I must say. But lovely as usualy.
| wqwq 8/10/02 . chapter 1
future is always depressing
| Hikarineko Skadi 8/8/02 . chapter 1
it pretty and a little depressing but hey the future is depressing.. see ya kari
| moonbunny38 5/27/02 . chapter 1
what can i say? yet another great poem.
| Laralanthalasa 5/26/02 . chapter 1
Neat one! This one makes me think of Oracles and such. Keep writing!
| The one and only STAR 5/20/02 . chapter 1
Lovely...you're great. BTW, thanks for reviewing my stuff _