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| Eads JA 2002-01-20 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed this. There was true substance to your story and what you wanted to accomplish with your characters. The use of forign languages adds some real flavor to the world. Good detail. I really couldn't rip this one apart. I have a feeling any unawnsered question I want to ask will be awnsered either in your other "books" or chapters to come. Keep it up. |