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| Max Radio 2006-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting, good for a thought, but sappy. 6/10 |
| L. A. Grimaldi 2004-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this piece. Bravo! I think you truly captured what a possible day in the life for somebody like that may truly be like. Excellent work. |
| Shona & Shell 2003-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWe think your story is good. It really puts you inside the mind of a typical "jock". But he seemed a bit intelligent to be a jock. |
| RealmLost 2002-01-23 ch 1, | abuseheheheheh! the prep story!! cool! it actually sounds right to me... lol.. it's quite well written though... Good job Beebo bun cake! HoLLiE |