typical plot. typical people thinking they'll fall in love at 14 and get married and have children. very underdeveloped characters. very underdeveloped plot and setting. very... underdeveloped altogether.

Oh man this is so KICKASS AWESOME! You have GOT to update ASAP!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

T~H

really really good... intense, well written, the centering thing you have going on has a really nice effect on it gotta tell you. real good

-ilka

Not bad, but do change the title. "Avenging Kimerley's Virginity", perhaps? The current title makes it suggest that the virginity itself is taking revenge. Basically sound apart from that, and a good story.

I return to read your works once again I am amazed.. *humbly bows*

eh.. a little off topic still good but a little unbelievable still I love it

egad more please more more more! Thank you for reviewing becoming katya i couldn't get anyone to! with love

OMG!! keep going! thats really good!!

Lovely writing style you have, nice suspense, just a coupla things:

Severely dodgy title - I do think it deserves summat better, and also, maybe you should expand on some of it, add some more description, and save the lovely snappy way of writing you have for more important parts, just for contrast.

Nice one mate

hey dude! Finally! YEAH! SO happy wonderfully written sigh please don't keep me in suspense too long to find out who is in the house! Do me a favor Read my becoming Katya story please I feel lonely....

wow. that was very good. The only thing I didn't like about it was the title. But i'm glad i read it. Anyhow, i hope you continue with this.

Oh wow this is really good.....can't wait for the next chapter

fa la la yeah more woohoo yes this is great the man his dead he blew off his head....
yet again *sigh* I wish I could write like you...

hey, great story really makes you feel like u were there yourself. just one little thing (and i know this is going to sound too critical)if kimberley had told the hospital ppl that she had been raped by her step dad, wouldnt they have gotten the police to take him away? sry it was just nagging my mind

WOW what a cool story! I think its really good well done.. I will look back for the next chapters