This is poem is wonderful!!

love the words!

Wow. Another briliant poem. The rhyme is beautiful. You are a very talented writer. By far your best work!!

I Love it... It really fits well together like a puzzle... It made me feel like I really knew the person you were talking about even though you didn't tell anything of what she looks like or anything. It made me feel peaceful If ya know what I mean...

Shad-o- G

I LOVE IT that was excellent ... kee up the good work!!!!
~ne 4 jm
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It's..I don't know the word, but I like it, you write good stuff!

I didn't find it odd at all. I like it. I enjoy reading your work. Please keep writing.

Very good poem, a little wierd, but sensible. Love it!

i like this very much. powerful imagery, nice paradoxes, the title is instantaneously attention-grabbing - is it about being human, or is it a completely new concept? its great, well done

Execellent poem!

i like the opposites. but you should break it up somehow. because this is a big mouthful in one stanza. I like this particular piece because you talk about maybe a bad girl (do you know her?). or is it you?

Nice, I enjoyed it. The idea really hit home, please write more!

it's not odd, it's differnt and that makes it shine :) In short I love it :)

Interesting concept. I bet if you felt like it, you could make a short story off that premise.

Cool beanz

*smiles* sad, I think