awesome =X

M meep ??Makes me think of Lloth.Nicely done... *shudders*

this is a very lovely poem, full of interesting phrases and whatnot. very lovely, if i say so

M, yes, quite perfect.

I agree with Queen Becca, sometimes the deeper poetry is better when not rhyming.

Hehe! This is good - there isn't enough horror-y poetry on this site for my liking.
I like very much!
Diana x

Hmhmhm very nice work. Ill be checking out some of your other work. You seem interesting. But to stay on subject, nice poem. I realy enjoyed it.

-S.S.

Lovely, lovely, me dear. Really, something worth reviewing can be hard to find. My only thought is that you might have done better not to make it rhyme; sometimes trying too hard for rhyme can make even the deepest topic seem cheesy. Not that you tried too hard, just consider using a non-rhyming format in the future, for this type of reflection? Aw, I dunno. You did a good job; what am I whining for? Maybe because I can really only write free-verse.
Heh. You reviewed one of my fic-things a while ago, and I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to return the favor. I grovel to your greatness. *cackle*
You said to think about how I will prevent the explosion... but I can't. I AM the explosion. And THAT is what scares me.
Now that I have darkened your day, (terribly sorry, I tend to do that! O_o') I'll be going. Before I scare you... *shrug* If I haven't already...?

'I am in you all...'

How true. How... disturbing.

*grins*

You've made my day.

Hmmmmmmm....

VERY GOOD!

I just might have to e-mail you about this......

Good job...I think you know what you want to say, and you have good ideas now you just need to find a good way to say them. It's a good start, probably your best poem here. Keep it up, you have much potential!!

Brilliant, wonderful, magnificeint,pure evilness... I as true Princess must say this poem is true... Yet don't forget... EVIL RULES ALL!!!
Now bow to me your Princess!!! Me! The Princess of the Dark! *Laughs with a voice of evil and terror*!

That was SO COOL. I REALLY like it. Especially the last line, how true. Sounds like something my friend would say "Good can not exist without Evil." and that's a direct quote. Yeah, I like it a lot. I think I'm going to add it to my favorites.

sweeet...yep, that's basically it

beautiful, great job

This, although not original-original is in its own way. Its so...I dno how to describe it. Brilliant maybe? Or beautiful?

Ooooh, evil. Cool!.....0_0 *Laughs in a manic sorta way* I like, I like! *Nods vigourously*