I liked it- it had a nice rhythm to it, and it was so true.

thank you, that was great. (( hugs you )) you can write rhyming poetry! you arent one of those people who's ideas of rhyming poetry is

"i had a dog
he sat on a log
his name was spot
because of his little dot"

=D
~Chris.

This is good! So sweet! I really like your poetry! Especially the one about socks!!! ^_^

I found this poem very touching, probably becasue I'm an online friend on the author and I know some of the feelings behind it. I know that I couldn't write a poem of this length. Good job, Pattycat! ^^

Wowww...I couldn't write a poem that long if I tried... ::sniffs:: and all my poetry sucks... but that is really sweet. ^^ (There, I hate reviewing things. I never know what to put) Your poetry is great, you are a great writer!