hey... this was beautiful. especially since Ana's Song is my favorite song and Silverchair is my favorite band. This was so true. You said at the bottom that it was sort of fanfic. do you write silverchair fanfic? if so, PLEASE tell me where I can find it. ever since the band section was taken down there's been a major lack of SC fic. thanx, love. later!--sarah

Wow, this is good. The lines have just the right... bounce (? Can't think of any other words!)
I've read some of your other stuff, and it's all really good, but this just made me go, 'ooh'!
Keep writing!
Sophie
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I LOVE THAT SONG!!! but i cant find my cd. anorexia sucks. good poem i like it.

OMG! I love silverchair! and Ana's song! nice poem!
it's sad!

this poem almost seems like a biological creation, if that makes any sense- the words themselves are only very loosely associated, but they fit together inexplicably. I don't know what else to say, except that this is wonderful work.

Stupid review tonight, I'm feeling tired. It made me shudder, which is a good thing. The way it flows from the third last line in the first stanza to the second last and then final is...there's something about it that screams 'This Is Fan-fcking-tastic poetry!'

Wow. It's very dark and tragic.

I love this poem. It is the truth... Keep writing!

jen

This is a good poem. Don't really like the last two lines, but the rest is good.